Posted by Claudia Moser on 9:27 PM in , ,
Beyond what we know 
To ponder and admire 
Heart, soul and mind.



Short, sweet, and right on!! Great post :)

Anonymous says:

Very thought provoking! Nice...

Such a great hiaku. :-)

Loved it! Short and sweet for us today, but still very effective. Have a great weekend with Peter.

@Jenn - thank you, long time since I wrote a haiku, the theme did inspire me!
@Beachlover - thank you, that was my attempt
@Misha - thanks!
@Diane - will do, hope the same applies for you.

Nice haiku - adventure nicely depicted.

@Suzy - thank you so much!

Short, sweet, and to the point!


@Kathy - thank you so much!

That's a pretty little piece.


@Joyce - sometimes small pieces are the best right?

Just brilliant!

@Reiza - how very sweet of you!

I just hopped over to your site via Stumbleupon. Not somthing I would normally read, but I liked your thoughts none the less. Thanks for making something worth reading.

@Desert tours morocco - thank you for your feeback!

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