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Storm

Posted by Claudia Moser on 11:14 AM in , ,

The heavy storm fades
Distant thunder heard, rain gone
Sun now coming out

Picture from here

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9 Comments

Paula Martin says:
9:51 PM

Love this!

Anonymous says:
11:04 PM

Perfectly captured the sense of transience in the picture, of how the sun might be disappearing or reappearing. Gorgeous.

Jo says:
5:54 AM

You rocked this one Miss Haiku Queen!

Anonymous says:
9:25 AM

LOL now you have me singing that silly song "the sun will come out tomorrow..lalalalalalalALAlala"

orchid0324 says:
12:15 PM

Dearest Claudia,
Oh, Haiku (俳句）♪♪♪　Beautiful one, my friend☆☆☆
Sending you lots of love and hugs from Japan, xoxo Miyako*

Langley Cornwell says:
3:44 PM

Super! I love that you interpreted the image as if the storm was over and I saw it as the storm was coming. I love reading everybody's take on the same pic.

Catch My Words says:
12:01 AM

Wonderful haiku to depict the photo.

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Claudia Moser says:
11:58 AM

Thank you, haiku is one of my favourite form of poetry, should probably write more, but I am not always inspired!

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