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Tiny heart

Posted by Claudia Moser on 1:54 PM in
Based on Diana Jillian challenge

Freestyle writing: Can you write something...Could be anything...Poem, Haiku, Cinquain, Short Story, etc., with the words "Tiny Heart" somewhere?

Hear the question
Driven by the need to know,
Tiny heart is puzzled.

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17 Comments

Sarah Tokeley says:
2:10 PM

I love the phrase 'tiny heart is puzzled'. There is something so beautiful about it.

Claudia Moser says:
2:24 PM

I love haikus - so intense!

Sush says:
4:26 PM

You always have such thought provoking posts!

Thanks and hugs~

Anonymous says:
4:39 PM

This is an absolutely amazing piece! =D

Claudia Moser says:
5:23 PM

@Sush - haikus inspire me :)
@Diana - thank you, it's all due your challenge :)

Southhamsdarling says:
6:20 PM

"tiny heart is puzzled." I found that very touching Claudia. Good post.

Claudia Moser says:
6:25 PM

@Diane - thank you, it is not a bad one!

Belle says:
7:54 PM

I love Haikus also. They say so much in so few words. Beautiful.

Claudia Moser says:
8:29 PM

@Belle - and somehow are easy to write!

Jilda says:
9:52 PM

beautiful post, Claudia! You are such a gifted writer.

Claudia Moser says:
9:53 PM

@Jilda - thank you, that means a lot!

Gawgus things... says:
10:31 PM

Beautiful. Have a wonderful holiday and enjoy all the celebrations :)

Claudia Moser says:
10:34 PM

@Emma - thank you! You're off to Ibiza as well!

Kathy says:
3:45 PM

Very thought provoking post! I have a small thought to add.

His tiny heart was born broken and struggled to go on.
Even with the help of others, his struggle wasn't long.
Six months on this earth,his tiny heart gave up, but his legacy lives on.
June 2010-Dec 2010
Thanks baby Riley, for the strength you've left us.

Claudia Moser says:
3:50 PM

@Kathy - I am so sorry for your loss!

Sarah Elisabeth says:
6:33 PM

Aw that was nice!
I didn't go with my family because I had to work this week. I've worked a lot this summer so it was not easy to get a vacation. But next week I am going to stay in Trondheim, and I will post about it on my blog! :)

Claudia Moser says:
6:41 PM

@Sarah - I see :) but still you had nice ideas for dinner :)))

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